Question

8．Describe your favorite teacher in no more than 120words according to the following points．His or her looks （hair\height\build）   
His or her likes or dislikes   
His or her personal character   
His or her way of teaching （at least one example）
（点题）My favorite teacher is Zhang Shishun．（外貌）He has short hair．He's of medium build．（喜好）He likes reading all kinds of books，writing notes and keeping doing exercises every day．He dislikes smoking，drinking wine and talking idly．（性格）He's outgoing and energetic．He can make a speech for four hours．
（教学方法）He's very patient and is never angry with his students．He has a positive way of looking at his students who have difficulites in learning．He said，"I'm happy to have such students．It's these students that give me chance to show my ability to educate them．"I'm not good at learning at the beginning．By and by，I make great progress because he keeps encouraging me and never say something bad to me．．

Answer 1

分析 此题是介绍人物的命题作文．1．审题立意：记叙文、描写人物、用第三人称、一般现在时．2、构思列纲：点名主题"最喜欢的老师"；根据题意内容对英语老师进行进一步的描写；这是一篇给材料作文，本文所给要点是几个问题，1．His or her looks （hair\height\build）.2．His or her likes or dislikes 3．His or her personal character 4．His or her way of teaching 故动笔前先要阅读要点，找出问题的答案．写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将问题所涉及内容表达完整．语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯．适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．重点词汇和句型：favorite，be of medium…，like doing sth，be angry with，make progress等

解答 （点题）My favorite teacher is Zhang Shishun．（外貌）He has short hair．He's of medium build．（喜好）He likes reading all kinds of books，writing notes and keeping doing exercises every day．He dislikes smoking，drinking wine and talking idly．（性格）He's outgoing and energetic．He can make a speech for four hours．
（教学方法）He's very patient and is never angry with his students．He has a positive way of looking at his students who have difficulites in learning．He said，"I'm happy to have such students．It's these students that give me chance to show my ability to educate them．"I'm not good at learning at the beginning．By and by，I make great progress because he keeps encouraging me and never say something bad to me．

点评 本题是考查书面表达能力，在平时的学习中要加强写的训练，达到熟练运用的目的，书写工整，语法准确，过渡自然连贯．