Question

17．请根据下面表格中的信息提示，写一篇关于濒危野生动物的英语短文，可适当发挥．要求：1.80词左右，语言流畅，无语法错误．2．可适当发挥．

现状	在我国，野生动物的数量越来越少，有些甚至濒临灭绝．
原因	人们大量砍伐树木；污染水源，大量捕杀野生动物．
措施	禁止乱砍乱伐树木；建立自然保护区．

参考词汇：die out绝迹 nature reserves自然保护区
In China，the number of wild animal isless and less，some are even endangered．We should protect them well．People often kill wild animals and cut down thetrees in forests．As a result，without the trees the animals lost theirhome and their food．And many animals are dying out because of water pollution．
I think that we should protect wild animals．Peoplemustn't cut downthe trees andfactories shouldn't pollute rivers and air．We should set up nature reserves．We will have a beautiful world to share with them．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
And many animals are dying out because of water pollution由于水污染，许多动物濒临灭绝．because of 因为…，后加代词/名词/动词的ing形式．
   高分句型二
  I think that we should protect wild  animals我认为我们应该保护野生动物．这是一个宾语从句，I think是主句，后面的是宾语从句．

解答 In China，the number of wild animal is less and less，some are even endangered【要点一，现状】．We should protect them well． People often kill wild animals and cut down the trees in forests．As a result，without the trees the animals lost their home and their food．And many animals are dying out because of water pollution【高分句型一，注意because of 的使用】．【要点二，原因】
     I think that we should protect wild  animals【高分句型二，注意宾语从句的使用】．People mustn't cut down the trees and  factories shouldn't pollute rivers and air．We should set up nature reserves．【要点三，措施】

点评 动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题．注意不要遗漏要点，句子要通顺连贯，没有语法错误．