Question

同学们，恩阳区即将建立恩阳高级中学新校区。让我们也行动起来吧！为了让学校变得更加美好，为家乡建设添砖加瓦，请同学们为校园建设积极建言献策。假如你是恩阳中学初三年级学生李华，请你写一份建议书。 (以上内容无需表述)

内容要点：1、校园环境（如：植树、种花、运动场、图书馆……）

       2、特色课程（如：舞蹈、音乐……）

 注 意：1、文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；80词左右。文章开头、结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

2、要点齐全，语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范，可以适当发挥。

3、提示词：hope; organize; playing fields（运动场）

Dear Headmaster,

I am very glad to write to you. These days we are talking about how to make our school more beautiful. Here are some of my suggestions.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

    Thanks for your reading!

                                                       Yours sincerely,

                                                                    Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear Headmaster,

I am very glad to write to you. These days we are talking about how to make our school more beautiful. Here are some of my suggestions.

  First, a library with a lot of interesting books in it should be built, so that we can read in our spare time every day. Second, we expect our own dancing hall and piano room. Many of us like dancing, and some are even good at playing the piano. Third, we hope to have a playing-field with many flowers and green trees around. We can exercise there every day to make our body strong. Finally, I suggest teachers in our school organize more colorful after- class activities for students.

  In a word, I hope our school will attract more visitors and I wish her a good future

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。要求对学校的发展提一些建议。主要用第一人称，一般现在时和将来时。提建议的词主要有：could, should, had better , hope to ,I think 等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文在提建议时，词语变化丰富，叙事有条理：  First， Second, Third，Finally ，In a word。使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

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