Question

【题目】书面表达（15分）

（1）Ann 和Anna 一样高，Anna比Ann外向，但是Ann的成绩比Anna好。

（2）Ann 和Anna都很健康，因为她们每天都锻炼，一星期要吃四至五次的蔬菜，而且从不吃垃圾食品。

（3）上个周六，她们和同学们一起骑车去人民公园（the People’s Park）玩了，上午做游戏，下午拍很多照，玩得很开心。

Ann and Anna are my classmates. They are twin sisters.

Answer 1

【答案】

Ann and Anna are my classmates. They are twin sisters.

Ann is as tall as Anna and Anna is more outgoing than Ann while Ann is better at learning than Anna. They are both healthy because they take exercises every day. They eat vegetable four or five times a week and they never eat junk food. They lead a healthy life.

Last week ,they with his classmates went to the People’s Park.. They played games in the morning and in the afternoon, they took lots of photos ,which make them happy. They had a good time.

【解析】

试题分析：本题是给提纲类作文，要求按提纲提示对双胞胎姐妹Ann和Anna进行描写。提纲提示了三个方面，一是两人的身高、性格、成绩，主要考查比较结构；二是两个的健康习惯，主要考查带有频率副词的一般现在时的句子，要注意频率副词的准确性及在句子中的位置；三是写上周六她们去人民公园的情况，考查一般过去时态。要注意时态的正确构成，也就是动词过去式的准确使用。

写作亮点：本文提到很多不错的短语如 be good at 擅长做某事，lead a ..life 过着…生活，take photos 照相。Anna is more outgoing that Ann while Ann is better at learning than Anna这句话中while表对比，使这句话形成鲜明前后对比。They eat vegetable five times a week and never eat junk food.这句话中and连接两个并且的谓语动词，时态保持一致。They played games in the morning and in the afternoon, they took lots of photos ,which make them happy.这句话中出现了which引导的非限制性定语从句。这些都使本文更生动。