Question

【题目】书面表达（满分15分）

同学们，在刚才的阅读中我们了解到一些有关西方饮食文化的有趣知识。现在某国外旅游杂志向你约稿，请你以 When in China, do as the Chinese do!为题写一篇文章，向西方读者介绍我们中国的饮食文化。以下是此杂志社发来的稿件要求，请仔细阅读，完成写作。

要求：内容合理；要点齐全；句子及篇章结构准确、连贯；书写规范。

Answer 1

【答案】

When in China, do as the Chinese do!

Meals in China are different in some ways from meals in the West. In China, lunch is usually served around 12 o’clock. As for dinner, Chinese people eat it much earlier than people in the West. Chopsticks are used to eat most food. Generally, for dinner, there’ll be lots of different dishes, not just three courses. Besides, Chinese people like to talk about food, so it’s a good topic during a meal. The golden rule is: when you’re in China, watch the Chinese and do as they do!

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求按所给提纲，给杂志社写一篇文章介绍中国的饮食文化，要仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点：中国人的饮食与西方人一样吗？中国什么时间吃午餐、晚餐？怎样吃食物？和老人一样怎样礼貌饮食？在中国怎样才知道这一餐吃结束了？吃饭时可以说话吗？等等。要依据提示问题或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。根据要表达的内容，本文主要用一般现在时态来写。要注意到：内容合理；要点齐全；句子及篇章结构准确、连贯；书写规范。

写作亮点：本范文按提纲要求，介绍了中国人的饮食文化，内容合理；要点齐全；句子及篇章结构准确、连贯。文章准确合理地运用了主动、被动语态形式，比如：lunch is usually served…（被动语态）；Chinese people eat it…（主动语态）；Chopsticks are used to eat…（被动语态）；短文中许多短语也运用得很恰当，比如：different from; in some ways ；as for ； 等等。