Question

1．要点：1．Jane，在一所混合学校学习，最喜欢的语言是法语．
2．长着一张国字脸，笔直的长头发，马尾辫．
3．爱整洁，慷慨大方，关心人，有一副好嗓子．
4．和她在一起从不感到无聊，愿意和朋友们分享她的快乐，
5．长大后想当一名社会工作者，倾听人们的问题并主动提供帮助．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
She always help others  without expecting anything in return．她总是帮助别人不求回报
expect…in return．期待…作为回报．
【高分句型二】
She wants to be a social worker so that he can listen to people and give them a hand．她想长大后想当一名社会工作者，以此倾听人们的问题并主动提供帮助．
want to be想成为…；so that引导目的状语从句；give sb a hand帮助某人．

解答 Jane is a girl that studies in a mixed school．Her favourite language is French．（学校和喜欢的语言） She has a square face，long straight hair and a ponytail．（外貌特征） She is generous and helpful．She always help others without expecting anything in return．【高分句型一】She has a beautiful voice and we all like to listen to her wonderful songs．If you stay with her，you will never feel bored．Jane likes share her happiness with her friends..（优点） She wants to be a social worker so that he can listen to people and give them a hand．（理想）

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