Question

【题目】书面表达

即将成为一名高中生的你，应该怎样完善自己呢？请你以“How to be an excellent student”为题，写一篇英语短文。

短文要点：

1.遵守校纪校规（按时到校，严谨吸烟）。

2.养成良好的学习习惯（上课认真听讲、课后复习、学会放松等）。

3.与人沟通、学会分享、互相帮助。

4.在家为父母做些力所能及的家务活（如洗碗、打扫卫生等）。

5.保护环境、积极参与志愿者工作。

要求：

1.词数：80-100词。文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数。

2.必须包括全部要点，但不能逐词翻译，可适当发挥。

How to be an excellent student

I am going to be a senior high school student.

I believe I will be an excellent student.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

How to be an excellent student

I am going to be a high school student.

At first I must obey the school rules. I will go to school on time and I will not smoke. As a high school student,it is important to have good study habbits. I should listen to the teacher carefully in class.go over and relax after school. And I am going to communicate better with my teacher and classmates. Share something good with my friends and help each other.At home I will try my best to help my parents do some housework.I will wash the dishes and clean the room. At last I will protect the environment and take an active part in the volenteer work as often as possible.

I believe I will be an excellent and successful student

【解析】

试题分析：文章应该用第一人称，主要用一般将来时态。描述即将成为高中生的自己应该如何做来完善自己。要注意句子的上下文的衔接，不要漏掉要点。

亮点说明：文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如 each other，try one’s best to do，it is+形容词+to do sth等。文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。