Question

【题目】? 上周你班举行了一次“告别陋习，走向文明”的??? 主题班会， 会上老师让你们谈谈身边同学的变化。 请按下列表中内容写一篇有关王明同学的文章。

过去的表现	现在的表现
经常和同学打架	与同学相处融洽
花很多时间玩电脑游戏	积极参加各项活动
经常吃垃圾食品	健康的生活习惯
在课上吃东西、睡觉	认真听讲，按时完成作业
考试不及格	各门学科学得都很好

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注意：1 文章必须包含表中所有要点，可适当发挥，使文章意思连贯，语句通顺。

2 字数80-100字。

3文中不得出现真实姓名、地名、校名等。

Wang Ming is my classmate. He has made great progress this term.?????????????????????

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Answer 1

【答案】Wang Ming is my classmate. He has made great progress this term. In the past, he always fought with others. He used to spend much time playing computer games. And he often ate junk food. In class, he either ate or slept. He could never passed any exams.

But now, he has changed a lot. He can get on very well with his classmates. He takes an active part in all kinds of activities. He has healthy living habits. He always pays attention to listening to the teachers carefully in class and finishes his homework on time. He does well in all the subjects. We all like him now.

【解析】这是一篇材料作文。内容是叙述王明在“告别陋习，走向文明”活动前后的表现。人称为第三人称，时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。一般现在时态的句子需要注意主谓一致的关系。

需要用到的重点短语：fight with sb.,used to do sth., spend some time doing sth.，get on well with，take an active part in，pay attention to，do well in等。