Question

根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所要完成的回信内。所给英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

俗话说“予人玫瑰，手留余香”。日常生活中我们会遇到各种困难，因此，我们会需要他人的帮助，但同时，我们也要学会帮助他人。假如你叫王芳，最近正在和美国笔友Ann通过邮件谈论“帮助”的话题，她想了解在日常生活中你是怎样帮助他/她人的。请你根据她的问题回复邮件。

提示词语：like, unhappy, smile, improve

Dear Ann,

Nice to hear from you.___________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________ _

Yours,

Wang Fang

 

Answer 1

Dear Ann,

Nice to hear from you. As you know I enjoy helping others. I still remember I helped a girl with her English when we were in Junior Seven. Li Hua, one of my classmates, was not good at English, but I did well. So one day, I went to her and told her I could help. Her big smile made me feel good. From then on, whenever she had problems, she would ask me, and I was patient to explain them to her. Little by little, her English improved with my help. At the same time, I found my English improved, too.

Everyone may have trouble in life and we should help each other. In fact, helping others is helping ourselves.

Yours,

Wang Fang

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。要求根据所给提示写一封信。本文所给材料比较详细，并且给出了具体要求，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。

考点：提示性作文。