Question

【题目】书面表达

May Day is coming，你准备去哪里春游呢？请你根据下面的思维导图提示，写一篇短文，介绍一下五一劳动节的出游计划。

要求：1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2. 包含所有要点，并作适当发挥；

3. 注意用第一人称表达，不得使用真实姓名和校名；

4. 语法正确，书写认真，词数 80 左右。

A Spring Outing

May Day is coming. All my family are very excited.

Answer 1

【答案】A Spring Outing

May Day is coming. All my family are very excited. We decide to go to Yangzhou for our holiday. It is not far away from Yancheng. We can drive there on our own.

Yangzhou is worth visiting. It is a beautiful place with many places of interest. And it is famous for the Slender West Lake. Every year, more than thousands of visitors go there for a visit. People can go rowing on the lake, enjoy the scene, visit the beautiful gardens and enjoy the delicious food there. Moreover, people in Yangzhou are quite friendly.

We are all looking forward to visiting it.

【解析】

本题是一篇话题作文，以“A Spring Outing”为题，写一篇短文，介绍一下五一劳动节的出游计划。本文人称主要是第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时。认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题，思维导图就是本文的提纲要点，根据提纲要点适当发挥，列出提纲。短文必须包含提示内容，条理清楚，字数80词左右。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：

春游

五一节就要到了。我的家人都很兴奋。我们决定去扬州度假。离盐城不远。我们可以自己开车去那里。

扬州值得一游。这是一个美丽的地方，有许多名胜。它以纤西湖而闻名。每年都有成千上万的游客去那里参观。人们可以在湖上划船，欣赏风景，参观美丽的花园，在那里享受美味的食物。另外，扬州人也很友好。

我们都期待着参观。