Question

【题目】书面表达

针对目前中学生压力大的心理状态，你们班就“中学生的烦恼”进行了一次调查。请根据下面的调查结果用英语写一篇调查报告，以便在班会上进行学习交流。

要求：1. 报告中须涉及到表格中所有的提示内容，可适当发挥；

2. 80—100 词，报告的开头已经给出，但不计入要求词数。

We did a survey about the problems we students face in our class. The results show the pressure we are under.

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Answer 1

【答案】We did a survey about the problems we students face in our class. The results show the pressure we are under.

Half of the students in our class think there’s too much homework. They don’t have much time for fun. Most of them worry about their exam results. A few students think their biggest problem is that they can’t get their parents’ understanding.

As for the ways to deal with these problems, most of them choose to talk to their friends. Some would rather listen to music. A few of them think talking to parents, reading books and playing sports are all good ways to help them forget about their

problems.

【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如too much homework，have much time for fun，most of them，worry about，get their parents’ understanding，deal with，talk to their friends，would rather，listen to music，a few of等。而Half of the students in our class think there’s too much homework. A few students think their biggest problem is that they can’t get their parents’ understanding.等多种从句句式的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。