Question

书面表达（15分）

从小到大你一定收到过许许多多的礼物，它可能来自你的亲人、朋友或老师，在礼物中总有一份或几份对你有特别的含义。请你以“A Special Gift”为题写一篇60～80词的短文，叙述你收到礼物的启示和感受。

A Special Gift

 

 

 

Answer 1

I remember my mother bought me a pair of yellow shoes when I was fourteen years old. But when I opened it, it’s really made me feel embarrassed. Because to be honest, I thought yellow was really ugly. But I pretended that I liked it because I knew it would make my mother happy and I remember in England there is a saying: it’s the thought that counts. So I wear it every summer. Every time I wear them, I can remember my mother’s love, and I am happy

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如But I pretended that I liked it because I knew it would make my mother happy and I remember in England there is a saying: it’s the thought that counts.等，Because So等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：话题作文。