Question

1．假如你叫Paul，是第一中学九年级学生，今年夏天即将毕业．初中三年你变化很大，请根据表格内容，用英语写一篇短文，记录自己的成长过程，并谈谈你的暑假计划．

过去	1．性格内向，不敢在人前讲话． 2．对学习不感兴趣，成绩不好． 3．不爱运动，沉迷电脑游戏．
现在	1．乐于分享，与同学相处很好． 2．各科成绩优异，…（举一例） 3．积极参加各类活动，…（举一例）
暑假计划	…（一至两点）

要求：1）词数100左右，文章开头已给，不计入总词数．
2）短文需包括表格中所有要点，并适当发挥．
3）字迹工整，条理清楚，行文连贯．
4）文中请勿提及你的真实姓名和学校．
I'm Paul，a Grade 9student in No.1Middle School．I'll graduate this summer．I've changed a lot during the last three years．In the past，I was too shy to speak in front of others．I wasn't interested in study，so I was weak in all my subjects．What's more，I didn't like sports．Instead，I was crazy about computer games．
However，I've changed greatly now．I'm willing to share things with others and I get along well with my classmates．I study so well that I'm a top student in our class now．Moreover，I take an active part in all kinds of school activities．Last term，I even won the prize in the school English Writing Competition．
During the coming summer holiday，I'll help my parents do some housework and do more reading to improve myself．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是记录自己的成长过程，并谈谈你的暑假计划．时态主要为一般现在时、一般过去时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1过去1）．性格内向，不敢在人前讲话．2）．对学习不感兴趣，成绩不好．3）．不爱运动，沉迷电脑游戏．
2现在：1）．乐于分享，与同学相处很好．2）．各科成绩优异，…（举一例）3）．积极参加各类活动，…（举一例）
3暑假计划
常用到的重点短语：
be interested in 感兴趣
be weak in 在…薄弱
what's more 再者
be crazy about  对…着迷
get along with  与…相处
take a part in 参加
【高分句型】
1．In the past，I was too shy to speak in front of others．
too+adj+to do sth 太…而不能．
2．I study so well that I'm a top student in our class now．
so…that，如此…以至于，that引导的结果状语从句．
3．I'll ①help my parents do some housework and do more reading ②to improve myself．
①help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
②动词不定式做目的状语．

解答 I'm Paul，a Grade 9 student in No.1 Middle School．I'll graduate this summer．I've changed a lot during the last three years．
      In the past，I was too shy to speak in front of others．【高分句型】（性格内向，不敢在人前讲话）I wasn't interested in study，so I was weak in all my subjects（对学习不感兴趣，成绩不好）．What's more，I didn't like sports．Instead，I was crazy about computer games．（不爱运动，沉迷电脑游戏）
     However，I've changed greatly now．I'm willing to share things with others and I get along well with my classmates．（乐于分享，与同学相处很好）I study so well that I'm a top student in our class now．【高分句型】（各科成绩优异）Moreover，I take an active part in all kinds of school activities．（积极参加各类活动）Last term，I even won the prize in the school English Writing Competition．
During the coming summer holiday，I'll help my parents do some housework and do more reading to improve myself．【高分句型】（暑假计划）

点评 本题是一篇图表作文，图表作为书面表达的一种信息提示方式，比提纲作文线索显得更简洁明了，写作时也容易区分表达，本题在写作时，要特别注意几种时态的运用，说到过去用一般过去时，现在的状况用一般现在时，将来的计划用一般将来时，不要混淆，不能逐句翻译，同时要根据提示有效灵活的构思，恰当使用逻辑词语，让文章显得有条理，不杂乱．