Question

【题目】书面表达。

友谊是人生不可缺少的一部分，请以“My Good friend”为题写篇短文来描述你的好朋友。信息如下：

职业：学生；年龄：13岁；能力和喜好：喜欢音乐；会弹吉他；擅长说英语。喜欢熊猫，因为它们有几分可爱，并且是中国的标志之一。日常生活：早上6:30起床；花大约半个小时骑自行车上学；下午有时放学后打半个小时的篮球。

要求：所写内容必须包括所有信息，字数不少于80字，文章开头已给，不计入字数；卷面整洁。

My Good Friend

I have a good friend. His name is Dave._______________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

My Good Friend

I have a good friend. His name is Dave. He is 13 years old. He likes music and he can play the guitar. Dave is good at speaking English. He often helps me with my English. He likes pandas because they are kind of cute and they are one of the symbols of China. Dave gets up at 6:30 in the morning and it takes him around half an hour to go to school by bike. In the afternoon, he sometimes plays basketball for half an hour after school.

This is my friend. We are good friends.

【解析】

试题分析：本题是一篇给提纲类作文，要求介绍一下自己的好朋友。根据提纲提示，短文要从朋友的基本信息、性格爱好及日常生活情况等方面展开写作。要注意三人称单数一般现在时态的正确构成及英文句子的基本结构的使用。短文用第三人称形式，一般现在时态。

写作亮点：本范文包含了提示的所有要点，条理分明，层次清楚，中心突出。其中用到的并列句、带有状语从句的复合句，不定式作主语等等复杂句式，及be good at doing sth, help sb. with sth，one of结构等等短语的准确使用，使本文显得更加具体生动，为本文增色不少。