Question

假设你是Peter,请根据以下信息，写一篇题为My Family的书面表达，字数至少六句话。标题和结尾已给出。

My Family

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I have a happy family. I love my family.

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

My family

My name is Peter. I come from America. I am twelve years old.I’m a student. There are three people in my family:my father ,my mother and I. My father is a doctor. My mother is a teacher. We are happy every day. I have a happy family . I love my family.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，Peter介绍他的家庭。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I am......；There are......及We are.......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了自己的姓名和年龄，接下来介绍家庭成员的职业，最后指出爱自己的家人。此处用了come from， twelve years old，every day. 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。