Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是李磊，中考（Senior High School Entrance Examination）在即，你的英国的笔友Andy给你发来电子邮件，想了解你近阶段的情况。请认真阅读下面的邮件，根据信中的内容及你的实际用英语回复。

To:Lilei@china.com

From:anyblack@britain.com

Subject: School life

Dear Li Lei, It is nearly two months since I last received your email. What are you busy with these days? I hear the Senior High School Entrance Examination is coming in Wuxi! What is your plan for it? What do you think of your subjects? If you have any worries or problems, please tell me, maybe I can give your some suggestions in next email. Wish you good luck! All the best, Andy

要求 1.词数90左右。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；

2.回复须符合邮件话题，结合自己的实际情况适当发挥，使全文连贯通顺；

3.不得出现真实人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

Dear Andy,

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I’m look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely

LiLei

Answer 1

【答案】These days I’m busy preparing for the Senior High Entrance Examination. I have a lot of exercise and homework to do everyday. I’m sorry I didn’t write to you sooner. I want to go to Nanjing High School for my further study. But I don’t do well enough in maths and English now. I feel stressed so much. My parents ask me to do more exercise to improve them, but I want to get enough time to think about some problems I didn’t solved before instead of doing so much exercise. Maybe I should have a deep talk with my parents about my study. I’d like to get your suggestions about facing stress.

【解析】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be busy doing，prepare for，a lot of，write to sb.，want to do，do well in sth.，so much，ask sb. to do，do more exercise，instead of，think about，have a talk with等。而复杂并列结构My parents ask me to do more exercise to improve them, but I want to get enough time to think about some problems …和I’m sorry I didn’t write to you sooner./ I want to get enough time to think about some problems I didn’t solved before instead of doing so much exercise.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。