Question

【题目】同学们即将告别紧张而忙碌的初三，迎来两个月的暑假。是不是有一点点小激动？《盐城晚报》教育专刊将进行征文比赛，请您畅谈暑假计划。请根据所给提示以“My Plan for This Summer Holiday”为题，用英语写一篇短文参加比赛。

注意：

1、词数：100词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）；

2、文中不能出现真实校名、姓名等信息；

3、文章必须包括表格所提供的信息, 并适当发挥, 注意行文连贯, 书写规范。

My Plan for This Summer Holiday

Grade Three will be over soon. The summer holiday is coming. I think many of us feel very excited about it. Here is my plan for holiday.

I hope that all of us will have a good time during this summer holiday.

Answer 1

【答案】My Plan for This Summer Holiday

Grade Three will be over soon. The summer holiday is coming. I think many of us feel very excited about it. Here is my plan for holiday. I will do exercise every day in order to keep healthy. I will want to travel anywhere interesting to keep relaxed. I will read a lot every morning. I will play basketball with my friends in the morning. I hope that all of us will have a good time during this summer holiday.

【解析】【亮点说明】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如be over soon，be coming，many of us，do exercise，every day，in order to，keep healthy，play basketball，in the morning，have a good time，during this summer holiday等。而I think many of us feel very excited about it./ I hope that all of us will have a good time during this summer holiday.等宾语从句的运用更是为文章增色不少。