Question

【题目】随着智能手机的逐渐普及, 人们可以用手机做的事情越来越多。很多人喜欢玩手机, 尤其喜欢用免费WiFi上网。用手机上网的确能做很多事情, 比如聊天、查询信息、购物等。但是手机上网也存在一定的弊端和风险, 比如个人信息泄露, 遭遇网络攻击或者网络诈骗。请你结合自身经历，用英语写一篇短文, 谈谈你对用免费WiFi上网的看法。

要求：1.词数不少于80词；

2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。

Answer 1

【答案】It’s true that many people like getting online by using free WiFi. It’s very convenient. However, there are many dangers lying in using the free WiFi.

I used to use free WiFi when I was out. But later, many useless messages came to my phone. And one day, I was told that I won a prize that was worth 5,000 yuan and they needed my bank account. Of course I didn’t believe it. But it was clear that some of my personal information had been exposed to someone.

So we should learn to keep us safe online. First, we’d better not use free WiFi in public, especially in strange places. Second, we shouldn’t put too much personal information on the Internet. Finally, we should be careful when we lend our mobile phones to others.

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，在介绍免费WiFi上网给人们带来便利的同时，也存在一定的弊端和风险。并结合自身经历，发表对免费WiFi上网的看法。本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥，作文主要包括三部分的内容。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称。注意多种时态的交替使用；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。