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2014年2月13日,李坚柔顶替受伤的王濛参加索契冬奥会短道速滑女子500米比赛，决赛中,她抓住了三个对手一起摔倒的机会稳扎稳打成功摘金获得冠军。成为继大杨扬之后，史上第四位获女子500米世锦赛冠军的中国选手。王濛说：“也许是坚持带来幸运,这不能说为侥幸，虽有运气成分，但李坚柔付出了真正的努力，同时心态稳定，各种因素之下，才夺得冠军”。请以Chance and Success为话题写一篇英语作文。

要求：1. 可适当添加符合实际的内容，语句通顺，意思连贯;

2. 词数不少于80词;

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Answer 1

Chance and Success

To our great joy, Li Jianrou won the first prize in the Women's 500m Speed Skating on February 13th,2014. She is a lucky dog. As you know, chance is one of the most important parts of success. But chances don't come often. And not all the chances can certainly lead to success. What’s more, chances and hard work are usually twins; most people don't know them. So if you want to achieve something, you must make efforts and get prepared. Or you will take no advantage of chances when they come to you. In my opinion, there are plenty of chances for everyone in our society, but only those who have made enough preparations and are highly talented can make use of them to achieve their purpose. Li Jianrou did so. Don’t you think so?

【解析】

试题分析：1.这是一篇话题作文。2.结合所给话题可知主要使用一般现在时态。3.在写作时要适当添加符合实际的内容，但一定要围绕本话题4.在写作时可以适当使用一些连接词，使上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。5.词数不少于80词。

【亮点说明】该文语句通顺，上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，是一篇优秀的作文。

亮点一：She is a lucky dog. 她是个幸运儿。

亮点二：chance is one of the most important parts of success. 机会是一个成功的最重要的部分。

亮点三：And not all the chances can certainly lead to success. 并不是所有的机会肯定会导致成功。

亮点四：So if you want to achieve something, you must make efforts and get prepared. 所以如果你想得到什么，你必须做好准备。

考点：话题作文。