春华秋实.梨园飘香．你决定邀请你校外教Peter共游梨园.享受采摘乐趣．请根据广告信息在QQ上给Peter留言.向他介绍中华梨园(Zhonghua Pear Village) 并发出邀请．要点提示:1．去中华梨园的理由,2．时间.地点.交通,3．活动安排．要求:1．词数:80词左右.开头已给出.不计入总词数．2．文中不能出现自己� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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16．春华秋实，梨园飘香．你决定邀请你校外教Peter共游梨园，享受采摘乐趣．请根据广告信息在QQ上给Peter留言，向他介绍"中华梨园（Zhonghua Pear Village）"并发出邀请．
要点提示：
1．去"中华梨园"的理由；
2．时间，地点，交通；
3．活动安排．
要求：
1．词数：80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数．
2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称．
Hi!Peter，
Pears are ready to be picked．Here I've found a good place to taste and pick pears．It's called Zhonghua Pear Village．（介绍中华梨园的环境交通等）The environment in the Zhonghua Pear Village is nice and enjoyable．The hills there are green and the water there is clear and clean．The road to the village is wide and the traffic is convenient．It's easy to get there by bus or by car．（活动安排）It's great fun to pick pears by yourself there and people can taste them for free．
（时间）The open time is from July 25th to August 31st．I'd like to know when you are free and I want to invite you to visit the village．I think we will enjoy ourselves．
Please write to me and tell me the time．．

分析这是一篇给出写作要点的提纲作文．内容邀请外教游梨园．时态为一般现在时．人称为第一人称和第三人称．写作要点包括：1．去"中华梨园"的理由；
2．时间，地点，交通；
3．活动安排．
常用到的重点句型和短语：
It's great fun，I'd like to，I think we will等

解答 Hi!Peter，
Pears are ready to be picked．Here I've found a good place to taste and pick pears．It's called Zhonghua Pear Village．（介绍中华梨园的环境交通等）The environment in the Zhonghua Pear Village is nice and enjoyable．The hills there are green and the water there is clear and clean．The road to the village is wide and the traffic is convenient．It's easy to get there by bus or by car．（活动安排）It's great fun to pick pears by yourself there and people can taste them for free．
（时间）The open time is from July 25th to August 31st．I'd like to know when you are free and I want to invite you to visit the village．I think we will enjoy ourselves．
Please write to me and tell me the time．

点评这是一篇给出写作要点的提纲类作文．考生需根据所给题目及要点展开作文．可先从最基本的词汇入手，然后组词成句，考生需特别注意英语的表达习惯，使文章看起来条理更清晰，语句更连贯．