Question

【题目】书面表达

请你比较一下你和你的最好的朋友Alice 之间的相同点跟不同点。可以从外貌，性格，兴趣爱好及学习等方面进行对比，词数不少于80.

Answer 1

【答案】

Alice is my friend. We have many things in common. But in some ways we are different.Alice is more outgoing than me. And I am quieter. We both like sports. But she likes volleyball better than me.I am better at playing soccer. She is taller than me and she is more athletic. She is more hard-working than me. So she always gets better grades. However, we both like take the bus to school.I don't think differences are important in a friendship.

【解析】

试题分析：根据题目提示，我们应该确定本文的时态应该用一般现在时，人称应该用第一人称；注意描述的顺序；注意时态，人称和固定词组搭配，注意连词的运用。注意句子的顺畅，应符合英语的表达习惯。

写作亮点：文中用了许多固定短语，如be good at, have...in common, get good grades等；连词but,and, however能够很好的连接文章; 文章也正确的使用了形容词的比较级，对人、事物作出了恰当的描述比较。