Question

4．假如你是李华，你的笔友Frank 是一名美国中学生，打算今年暑假来南充旅游．请你根据以下思维导图，用英语写一封email 给他介绍一下南充． 

要求：1．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2．必须包含思维导图所给的提示，并做适当发挥；
3．行文中不得出现真实人名，校名或地名（思维导图中提及的除外）；
4．词数：80-100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）．
Dear Frank，
I'm glad to hear that you will come to Nanchong this summer vacation．                       
Hope to see you!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①I'm glad to hear that you will come to Nanchong this summer vacation．听说你今年暑假要来南充，我很高兴．be glad to do sth很高兴做某事，that后面跟的是一个宾语从句．
②There are many places of interest in Nanchong．南充有许多名胜古迹．there be表示某处有某物，be动词和后面的名词单复数形式保持一致．

解答 Dear Frank，
I'm glad to hear that you will come to Nanchong this summer vacation（高分句型）．（引出话题）Nanchong is a great city with a long history．You can watch North Sichuan Puppetry and know about Chen Shou，a well-known historian．He wrote a book called Records of the Three Kingdoms．（介绍南充的历史文化）
There are many places of interest in Nanchong（高分句型）．You can visit Langzhong Ancient City．The buildings are so amazing．And you can enjoy the fantastic Jialing River and the wonderful Mount Lingyun．If you want to relax yourself，make sure to try Zhangfei Beef，Clear Noodles in Chili Sauce and other delicious food．Besides，you can have fun and buy something special for your family and friends at Wangfujing Mall．（具体介绍南充的风景名胜及特色小吃）
Hope to see you!
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 这是一篇图画作文，动笔前应认真看图，了解图画内容，展开合理想象．然后根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题．此类作为首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题．写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误．