Question

10．某英语教育网站正在开展主题为"How can a teenager have a successful life？"的讨论，为此你采访了一些同学（结果见下表）．请据上经用英语写一篇短文参与讨论，并阐述你的观点．

同学主要观点	你的观点
l  努力学习 l  尊重父母 l  服务社会 l  计划未来	…（至少两条）

注意：（1）短文必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节；
（2）你的观点至少两条；
（3）词数：80-100；
（4）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：尊重respect
短文首句：I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other我们需要交一些好朋友那样我们能彼此学习．
so that引导的目的状语从句．
【高分句型二】
we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it's important to a successful life我们必须活跃，更多的锻炼去保持健康因为对于一个成功的人生是重要的．
because引导的原因状语从句．

解答 I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life．
Most students believe it's necessary to study hard．After all，study plays a key role in their life．They also agree they should respect their parents，who look after them every day．Besides，they're ready to serve the society and in their opinion it's really meaningful．What's more，they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future．（同学主要观点）
From my point of view，we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other【高分句型一】．Also，we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it's important to a successful life．【高分句型二】（你的观点）

点评 做英语书面表达时，只要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句．最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误．