Question

14．对于大家来说，宝贵的初中学习生涯已即将走过一半，在这段时间里，肯定有很多老师在学习和生活上给了你帮助和影响，请你以"the most beautiful teacher in my heart"为题写一篇短文说说你心目中最美的老师，为什么他（她）是你心目中最美的老师，同时并表示对他（她）的感谢．
提示词语：thank you，kind，forget，be in trouble，with the help of，stay in touch
要求：
1．表达清楚，语法正确，上下连贯；
2．词数：80词左右．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
The history class which he taught was very interesting．他教的历史课很有趣． which he taught was very interesting是一个定语从句，修饰先行词class．
高分句型二
 he often helped us when we were in trouble．当我们有困难时，他经常帮助我们．这是when引导的时间状语从句，当…时候．

解答 The most beautiful teacher in my heart
 The most beautiful teacher in my heart is my  history teacher，Mr．Li【开篇点明主题】．He was a very kind teacher with thick glasses．The history class which he taught was very interesting【高分句型一，注意定语从句的使用】，he often helped us when we were in trouble．【高分句型二，注意时间状语从句的使用】He always told us to study hard and tried our best to make a contribution torealizing our modern motherland．With the help of him，we we were good at history．【正文部分详细介绍老师】He is so good a teacher that I will not forget him forever!【结尾紧扣主题】

点评 动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词．写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．