Question

书面表达

假设你叫Liu Yan，初中三年，你与同学们在一起学习、参加各种活动，相互帮助，彼此之间建立了深厚的友谊。校园网的英语论坛开辟了“Thank you letter”专栏。请按下面的要求给你的同学Ling Feng写一封感谢信。

注意：

1．这封信要表达你对Ling Feng的感谢；

2．信中要简述感谢Ling Feng的原因，适当举例，并谈谈自己的感受；

3．词数：不少于60词。(信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计算在内。)

4．文中不能出现真实姓名及校名。

提示词语：thank you, at the end of, kind, forget, help…with, stay in touch

　　Dear Ling Feng,

_________________________________________________

Yours,

Liu Yan

Answer 1

答案：
解析：

Dear Ling Feng, 　　I would like to thank you at the end of our middle school education．You have been very kind and helpful since we knew each other． 　　You have given me so much help that I will never forget．Last term, I caught a bad cold and had to stay at home for a week．When I was worrying about the lessons, you came to my home after school and helped me with every subject．With your help, I didn’t fall behind others．Since then, we have become very close friends． 　　Thank you again．Even though we may go to different schools, I’ll always stay in touch with you．I wish you success for the future． Yours Liu Yan 　　书面表达评分标准： 　　第一档：(15－13分) 　　完全符合题目要求，内容完整、丰富、健康。使用多种句型结构和丰富的词汇。语言通顺，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。 　　第二档：(12－9分) 　　基本符合题目要求，内容基本完整。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯，表达基本清楚。虽然有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。 　　第三档：(8－5分) 　　部分内容符合题目要求，内容不够完整。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，表达不够清楚，影响整体理解。 　　第四档：(4－0分) 　　与题目有关的内容不多，只能简单拼凑提示词语，所写内容难以理解。