Question

【题目】写作（计 10 分）

请根据以下交通事故因素（factors）统计图表，以“Major causes of traffic accidents” 为题，用英语写一篇简短的分析报告，向学校英语报投 稿。

注意：

1. 报告需逐条陈述下面 pie chart 和 bar chart (柱状图) 中呈现的主 要内容。（至少 5 点）

2. 提出你对交通安全总的看法。（至少 2 点）

3. 词数：100 词左右，所给标题不计入总词数。

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Major Causes of Traffic Accidents

Nowadays, there are always kinds of traffic accidents reports from newspaper, TV news and so on. As a result, it’s important for us to analyze the major causes. The following are two reports:

According to the pie chart, there are mainly three factors:85% is about driver factors; 5% is from vehicle factors and 10% is environment factors. Among them, it’s quite clear that the first one is holds 15%, tired driving which is 25% as well as not using seat-belt which is 25%.

In my opinion, everyone should keep in mind that traffic safety is one of the most ways in our life. At the same time, we should try our best to obey the traffic rules. The harder we try, the happier our life will be!

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给图表作文，根据图表显示介绍交通安全事故发生的因素以及自己的观点。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：There are……， it is important for sb to do sth, it’s quite clear that……, everyone should……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意要切题，思路清晰。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了交通安全事故频发，接下来介绍两个表格，表格一：驾驶员因素 85%，交通因素 5%，环境因素 10%。，表格二：超速 50%，酒驾 15%，疲劳驾驶 25%，不系安全带 25%。最后表达自己的观点：要有交通安全意识，要遵守交通规则。此处as a result, in my opinion, keep in mind, at the same time, try one’s best to do sth, the+形容词比较级， the +形容词比较级等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。