Question

【题目】

要求：

1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当拓展，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；

3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名。

Dear Tony,

I am glad that you are interested in our activity of “Good Habits, Good Lives”. As we know, good habits can make our lives better.

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tony,

I am glad that you are interested in our activity of “Good Habits, Good Lives”. As we know, good habits can make our lives better. Firstly, we should go to bed and get up early. Don’t stay up too late at night. Enough sleep is good for our health. Secondly, we should have healthy eating habits. Life should be regular. We shouldn’t go to school without breakfast .We had better eat more fruit and vegetables. Don’t eat junk food. Thirdly, exercising is helpful to keep healthy. It is necessary for us to exercise at least twice a week. Finally, we must say no to smoking and drinking. In a word, if we want to keep healthy and happy, we must develop good living habits.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下“好习惯塑造好生活”。所提供的材料中列举了饮食习惯、生活习惯和其他的一些好习惯。主要介绍你自己对于这两者的看法和做法。时态用一般现在时，人称主要用第一人称we来写。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

I am glad that you are interested in our activity of “Good Habits, Good Lives”. 我很高兴你对我们的“好习惯，好生活”活动感兴趣。

句子that you are interested in our activity of “Good Habits, Good Lives”. 是由that引导的宾语从句。

【高分句型二】

这篇作文使用了很多的祈使句或含情态动词的句子。例如：（1）Don’t stay up too late at night. （2）Don’t eat junk food. （3）We shouldn’t go to school without breakfast. 丰富了作文的内容。

【高分句型三】

It is necessary for us to exercise at least twice a week. 我们必须每周至少锻炼两次。

这句话用到了句型：It is+形容词+for sb. to do sth.