题目内容
一首 “ Where is the time?” 又一次引发了人们对时间的感慨,作为即将参加中考的你,将怎样充分利用时间,为初中三年画上一个圆满的句号。请从以下几个方面,以“ Treasure every minute”为题,写一篇不少于100词的短文。(文章里不能出现真实校名和人名)
(1)时间的重要性 (2) 你身边浪费时间的现象
(3)你的时间去哪儿了 (4)你将怎样充分利用余下的时间?
Treasure every minute
One possible version:
Time is important to everyone. Lost time will never come back. We must keep this in mind in our daily life and make the best use of our time. But some people spend too much time in playing the computer games. Some spend in playing, singing and chatting online. In the past I wasted a lot of time playing with my friends. How can I make full use of the rest time? First of all, I'd better make a plan. I should arrange my study, work and rest. I can know whatI should do next so that I can save as much time as possible when I study or work, I should put my heart into it. I should spend every minute on it.After a period of time's study and work I can take a good rest.I think that all of us should Treasure every minute.
【解析】
试题分析:考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示,认真审题,确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要是写出浪费时间的现象和你打算怎样充分利用时间,因此一般现在时和一般将来时使用的比较多,所以在写作时,要注意时态的变化。根据情景的发展,按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。
温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少.如: keep this in mind;make full use of;In the past I wasted a lot of time playing with my friends. I should put my heart into it。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
考点:提纲作文。