Question

【题目】书面表达 (满分15分)

南京市政网上贴出了一张海报，评选幸福指数最高的社区。请阅读海报内容，写一份推荐信，介绍你所在的社区。

[注意：

1．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；

2．语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；

3．词数80左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear sir:

I would like to recommend my neighbourhood to be the happiest one in Nanjing.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear sir:

I would like to recommend my neighbourhood to be the happiest one in Nanjing. I know you are looking for the happiest neighbourhood in Nanjing. We just live in such a neighbourhood. Our neighbourhood Xingfuxiaoqu is so clean and beautiful. The people are very friendly to each other. We get along well with each other, too. People often help clean the streets and water the grass and flowers. The children always played happily in the garden of the community after school. The old people take line dance on the square every night. How happily we are living!

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Jian

【解析】

试题分析：本文内容要求你写一封书信。本文应以第一人称和一般现在时态叙事为主。灵活采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点： 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，使文章的表达更有逻辑性、更富有条理，语言流畅、感染力强。如: such a neighbourhood，be very friendly to , each other, get along well with, help do,looking forward to 等；还有感叹句的恰当使用, 为文章增色不少。