Question

【题目】假设你叫张跃,你们学校评选年度“最佳学生”,你想推荐本班男同学刘彦。根据图片信息向张校长写一封推荐信。

要求：1、书写规范,字迹工整

2、语句通顺,条理清楚,不要遗漏要点。

3、词数80词左右,信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Mr. Zhang,

I would like to recommend Liu Yan for this year’s Best Student Award.

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We all think Liu Yan should get the award. I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully,

Zhang Yue

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Zhang,

I would like to recommend Liu Yan for this year’s Best Student Award.

Liu Yan is my classmate. He is clever and does well in all his lessons. He learns things quickly and plans everything well.

Liu Yan is kind and helpful. He often takes part in some activities like collecting clothes and books for children in need. He often helps us fix broken desks and chairs. Last month, a 7-year-old boy lost his way and Liu Yan helped the boy find his home. Last weekend, he saved an old man from a fire.

We all think Liu Yan should get the award. I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully,

Zhang Yue

【解析】

这是一篇给定材料的提纲式作文。根据要点提示可知，要从三个方面去完成写作：1.能力：聪明，各门功课优秀，计划周密。2.个性：善良，乐于助人。3.事迹：经常参加一些为贫困儿童募集衣服、书本的活动；上个月，一个7岁的男孩迷路，他帮孩子找到了家；上周末，他从大火里救出一位老人。事迹也可以写其他内容，自由发挥的空间较大。根据材料内容可知，本文主要用一般现在时态和一般过去时态，主语为第三人称单数，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。