Question

【题目】书面表达（满分15分） 根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。开头和结尾已给出，不用抄在答题纸上。

假期即将来临，你一定有许多计划。假如你是李华，请给你的美国笔友John写一封信，谈谈你假期生活（至少三个方面）的计划及理由，可适当发挥。

Dear John, The winter vacation is coming. ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear John,

The winter vacation is coming. It’s time for everyone to make plans. Let me share mine with you.

First of all, I’ll take a trip to Xi’an to visit my uncle and aunt. I’ll do more exercises, because it is good for my health. I’ll go skating with friends. I’ll also take the great chance to stay at home to read some books and go to the movies.

Besides, I’ll learn something important. So I’ll take piano lessons and learn to make fruit salad. I think I’ll learn a lot as well as have a good time in the coming vacation.

How about your winter vacation? I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，以李华的名字，给美国笔友John写一封信，谈谈你假期生活的计划及理由。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般将来时。人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：It’s time for sb to do sth，It is…，I’ll do…以及 I think…等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，充分利用题目中所提供的短语。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了写信目的是要分享自己的寒假计划，接下来介绍自己的寒假计划：看望叔叔和婶婶、做锻炼、读书、学习钢琴等，最后期望收到John的回信。此处share with, take a trip to, take the chance to do sth, have a good time, look forward to doing sth等这些词组的运用让文章增色不少,连词First of all, because, so, besides, as well as的运用让文章连贯，衔接自然。