Question

17．假如你是Mike，你收到了来自中国的笔友李林的来信，在信里他向你倾诉学英语的苦恼，抱怨中国人为什么要学英语，请你给他回信告诉他学习英语的重要性并给出一些学习英语的建议，词数：80词左右，信的开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear LiLin，
How are you？Thank you for your letter．English is very important in our lives．Lots of foreigners come to China．English is widely used and useful in the world．It's important for us to learn it well．
I began to study English at the age of nine．At the beginning，I was weak in it．With the help of my teacher and classmates，I have made great progress．I did a lot to improve my English．First，I listened to my teacher carefully at class and made some notes so that I could review my lessons after class．Second，I practiced listening and speaking a lot．I was not afraid of making mistakes．I also tried to read more English magazinesand stories．
I hope my English teacher can hold some English parties and an English corner for us．I also hope we can listen to some beautiful English songs after class．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I think English is widely used and useful in the world我认为英语在全世界广泛运用，也是很有用的．
think后是省略that的宾语从句．
【高分句型二】
It's important for us to learn it well对于我们来说学好英语是重要的．
it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．

解答 Dear LiLin，
How are you？Thank you for your letter．English is very important in our lives．Lots of foreigners come to China．English is widely used and useful in the world．【高分句型一】It's important for us to learn it well．【高分句型二】（英语的重要性）
I began to study English at the age of nine．At the beginning，I was weak in it．With the help of my teacher and classmates，I have made great progress．I did a lot to improve my English．（学习英语的经历）First，I listened to my teacher carefully at class and made some notes so that I could review my lessons after class．Second，I practiced listening and speaking a lot．I was not afraid of making mistakes．I also tried to read more English magazines and stories．（具体方法）
I hope my English teacher can hold some English parties and an English corner for us．I also hope we can listen to some beautiful English songs after class．

点评 首先要仔细审题，严格按照要求去写作．其次要注意时态人称的选择；再次行文中要语句通顺，注意上下句的衔接，用英语式的思维去组织每个句子，避免受汉语的影响．采用不同的句式，尽量避免重复．注意不要出现单词，语法和时态等的错误．这样的文章就是好文章