Question

4．Write at least 60words on the topic"I want to invent ______"
（以"我想要发明 ______"为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
（注意：1、在答题纸上将题目补充完整．2、短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分．）
The following is for reference only．（以下表达仅供参考）
•It can be used to…
•It will be exciting/necessary/helpful to…

Answer 1

分析 写作之前要审清要求，整理如下：1．不少于60词．
                            2．短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息．
                            3．尽量用上提供的句型．

解答 I want to invent a time machine
      As a student who is experiencing unprecedented modern life nowadays，I would rather learning about the history and the future life of human being from a real experience than learning from a textbook．That's why if I can work as a great inventor，inventing a time machine will be my first choice．It can be used to visit one of best schools in Tang Dynasty．As we all know，Tang Dynasty is famous for its open-minded education．Therefore，when I visit the school of the ancient city，I cannot only try different ways of studying but communicate with people from different countries as well．Using a time machine is the most vivid way to learn history as it is both a record of mankind and a mirror of past，I am looking forward to the day when my time machine comes out．It will be exciting to have a time machine．

点评 本题要求写一篇有关学生最想要发明的东西的议论文．要求中已经给出一些要求．动笔前先要注意认真写作要求，确定写作内容；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句．最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后反复读几遍，适当修改．