Question

3．假如你是Grace，Jenny是你的好朋友．最近你准备参加学校举行的题为"My friend"的英语征文竞赛．请根据以下内容，完成这篇短文．短文不得少于50词，可适当发挥．
要点：
1．姓名：Jenny Brown
2．年龄：12岁（years old）．
3．电话号码：276-3589．
4．家庭成员：爸爸、妈妈、一个哥哥和一个妹妹．
5．房间：如下图．

My friend
Hi，I'm Grace．I have a good friend．Her name is Jenny Brown．She's 12 years old．Her phone number is 276-3589．There are five people in her family．They are her parents，her brother，her sister and she．
　　She has a nice room．A bookcase，a bed and a sofa are in her room．A chair and a desk are in it，too．Jenny's hat is on the bed．Her clock is on the small table．A pen，a notebook and a key are on the desk．She likes her room very much．
　　I have a good friend．What about you？．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①Jenny's hat is on the bed．詹妮的帽子在床上．这里Jenny's hat 表示詹妮的帽子，使用的是名词所有格，表示某某的，on the bed表示在床上．
②What about you？你呢？这里what about表示某某怎么样，后面跟名词，代词或者动名词形式．

解答 My friend
Hi，I'm Grace．I have a good friend．（引出话题）Her name is Jenny Brown．She's 12 years old．Her phone number is 276-3589．There are five people in her family．They are her parents，her brother，her sister and she．（介绍她的基本情况）
　　She has a nice room．A bookcase，a bed and a sofa are in her room．A chair and a desk are in it，too．Jenny's hat is on the bed（高分句型）．Her clock is on the small table．A pen，a notebook and a key are on the desk．She likes her room very much．（介绍她的房间）
　　I have a good friend．What about you（高分句型）？（结束语）

点评 在写作时要明确写作要点，注意写作中人称和时态的使用，做到思路清晰，表达流畅．还可以根据考生的语言积累，多使用一些短语和高分句型．