Question

【题目】某英文网站的“Student Life”栏目正在向中学生征文，标题为“A Time When I Made Someone Happy”，请你写一篇英文稿件。

要点提示：

1．你使谁开心了？

2．发生在什么时间？

3．你都说了什么，做了什么？

4．为什么让他/她开心了？

5．那一刻你是什么感受？

要求：

1．语言规范，语句通顺，内容充实；

2．字数：不少于100词。

A Time When I Made Someone Happy

Answer 1

【答案】A Time When I Made Someone Happy

Last summer, though it was hot, I volunteered to teach children English in rural area.When I arrived there, I couldn't adjust to the weather and life style.However, as time went by, I found myself quite happy when I saw the students I was teaching made great progress.In order to teach them, I had to keep on learning as well.As a result, my English improved a lot.Also, I made friends with some of my students.We are still keeping in touch by letters now.

In a word, not only did I help those in need, but also I myself learnt a lot that summer.If I have another chance to do volunteer work, I am ready to go.

【解析】

话题作文写出的句子要达意，完整，语法正确，合乎习惯，特别是句式，谓语动词形式要有根有据，选用比较有把握的词汇，用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。英语作文要注意人称和时态，根据文章可知主要用第一人称，一般过去时态，注意谓语动词的正确形式，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。英语作文，要忠实于材料，注意用好连词。