Question

16．今天是西方的"父亲节"，请根据以下的提示以My Best Dad为题写一篇短文介绍自己的父亲．

要求：1．文中需包含提示中提到的至少4条内容：
2．可根据图片发挥想象、适量拓展；
3．句子及篇章结构准确、连贯，书写规范；
4．词数：80-100词左右；
5．文中不得出现父亲的真实姓名、工作单位及考生的任何个人相关信息．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
When he comes home，he likes to tell us something interesting he's heard during the day．
句中"When he comes home"为时间状语从句，句中短语有"like to do sth 喜欢做某事"．这句话意为：当他回到家里时，他喜欢给我们讲他白天听说的有趣的事情．
高分句型二：
And his pockets are full of chocolates that always make me happy．
句中"that always make me happy"为定语从句，修饰"chocolates"．句中短语有"be full of 充满了"．这句话意为：而且他的口袋里装满了能让我快乐的巧克力．

解答 My Best Dad
     My dad is the best man I know．（开篇点题）
     He is 45 years old．He is so good at making my whole family happy．When he comes home，he likes to tell us something interesting he's heard during the day．【高分句型一】And his pockets are full of chocolates that always make me happy．【高分句型二】】He likes eating noodles best．My favorite memory of my dad is that he always wants to keep me from making mistakes but he tries to let me find my own way，even though his heart breaks in silence when I get hurt．（介绍我的爸爸）
    This is my best dad．I love him and I'm so proud of him．（总结全文）

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