Question

假定你是黄林，正在参加英语夏令营。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，谈谈你在夏令营的活动及收获。

内容要点提示：

1、参加篮球等体育比赛，学会与队友合作；

2、参加“英语角”，结交新朋友；用英语交流，提高英语水平；

3、收获……。

要求：

1、80词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

2、文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称等相关信息。

Hello, everyone!

I am Huang Lin. I have learnt a lot on the English Summer Camp.

 

Answer 1

Hello, everyone!

I am Li Hua. I have learnt a lot on the English Summer Camp.

I am good at sports, so I joined the basketball team. We had a basketball match with another team. And our team won the match at last. Through the match I learned how to work with the teammates. I was very happy.

  I love English, I also joined the English Corner. I made some new friends there. We got on well with each other. We talked with each other in English. It improved my English quickly. Besides, I learned something different cultures.

  I think I have done a good job. Thank you.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇命题作文。题中给出了要点提示。写作时，一定要覆盖这些要点，不能遗漏；并且可适当的发挥，有效的使用语句间的连接成分，例如承上启下的句子，或者是连接词等，使文章结构更紧凑。另外，注意时态的正确使用。

【亮点分析】

这篇作文要点齐全，表达准确流利，结构严谨。文章使用了一些很有用的表达方式和句型，例如：I am good at sports, so I joined the basketball team我擅长运动，所以我参加了足球队。Be good at擅长于；Through the match I learned how to work with the teammates.通过比赛我学会了如何和队员合作；how引导了宾语从句；再如get on well with each other彼此相处很好；等等。

考点：提纲类作文。