Question

【题目】暑假即将来临，许多学生喜欢下河游泳。为预防游泳溺水事故的发生，你们班将举行以“珍爱生命，预防溺水”为主题的班会。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，谈谈你对安全游泳的建议。建议内容包括：不要到陌生的河流湖泊游泳；不允许擅自结伴游泳；不会游泳，不要下水救人……

要求：1 .语言通顺，意思连贯，符合逻辑；

2 .内容可适当发挥；

3 .文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；

4 .词数：70词左右。

参考词汇：alone; without permission（未经许可）allow;

ask for help; cherish（珍爱）

Going Swimming Safely

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Answer 1

【答案】Going Swimming Safely

Summer vacation is coming. Many students like going swimming in rivers or lakes. But how to swim safely? Here is my advice: Don’t swim in strange rivers or lakes. We shouldn’t go swimming alone. We can’t swim with other students without permission. We are not allowed to swim without parent. If we can’t swim, we mustn’t get into the water to save a person. Sometimes it is dangerous for students to swim.

We live only once, we must cherish our lives.

【解析】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了大量短语，例如like doing sth.，go swimming，in rivers，how to do，with other students，without permission，allowed to do，get into the water，save a person，cherish our lives等。同时But how to swim safely? /Here is my advice / Sometimes it is dangerous for students to swim.等多种特殊句式结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是短文的亮点。