Question

【题目】 写作：中学生普遍面临着很多烦恼，请用英语描述下面表格中列出的问题，并提出自己的建议。

烦恼1	整天有做不完的作业，经常熬夜学习，无暇顾及个人爱好；
烦恼2	父母太忙，没有时间陪自己；
烦恼3	几乎没有亲密的朋友可以交流，经常感到孤独；
烦恼4	对自己的体重不满意，不知如何改变；
建议	… …

要求：1、条理清楚，语句通顺；

2、80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Now, many middle school students face some problems.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Now, many middle school students face some problems.

Many students have too much homework to do. To finish it, they have to stay up late. So they often feel tired and have no spare time for their hobbies. Some students feel lonely because their parents are too busy to stay with them and they don’t have any close friends to talk to. I think they can talk to their parents and teachers about their problems and ask them for help.

Some other students aren’t happy with their weight. To lose weight and keep fit, they need to do more exercise and eat healthy food.

【解析】

试题分析：本题的主题是描述问题然后写出自己的合理化建议。首先应该熟读表格中所列举的一些问题，分析出问题的所在，然后，根据情况提出自己的合理化建议。在写作时，本文的主语可以用第三人称，时态一般应该用一般现在时。应该尽量包括文中提示的内容，可稍加拓展。

写作亮点：本文描述准确，内容比较完整，语言表达简练准确。使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，比如：Some students feel lonely because their parents are too busy to stay with them。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。