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4．近日，随着《中国足球改革总体方案》的出台，"足球进校园"已成为社会热议的话题．假设你是张伟，你的好友王明想加入校足球队，但是他的父亲认为踢足球会影响学习．请你根据以下提示给王明的父亲写一封信，帮助王明说服他的父亲．
关键词提示：good for health； serious about； more confident； encourage him； team effort； communicate…with； make more friends； decide by himself
注意：1．文中应包含所有提供的信息，并进行适当拓展；
2．词数：80-100（给出的文章开头供选择使用，不计入总词数）．
Dear Uncle Wang，
I am Zhang Wei，a friend of Wang Ming．I heard that you didn't agree Wang Ming to join the school soccer team and thought it would have a bad influence on his study．However，I don't think so．Here are my reasons．
                                                     
I'm looking forward to your reply．Thanks so much．
Yours，
Zhang Wei．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
高分句型一：Firstly，playing soccer is good for his health and health is more important than grades首先，踢足球对他的健康有好处，健康比成绩更重要．这是一个由动名词充当主语的句子，be good for是一个固定短语，意思是对…有好处，后面是一个比较级．
高分句型二：If he is allowed to do what he likes，he will be more confident．It will also encourage him to work hard in study如果他被允许做自己喜欢做的事，他会更加自信，这也会鼓励他努力学习．这是一个由if引导的条件状语从句，要遵循主将从现的原则．

解答 Dear Uncle Wang，
I am Zhang Wei，a friend of Wang Ming．I heard that you didn't agree Wang Ming to join the school soccer team and thought it would have a bad influence on his study．However，I do not think so．Here are my reasons．
Firstly，playing soccer is good for his health and health is more important than grades（高分句型一）．Secondly，he's serious about playing soccer．If he is allowed to do what he likes，he will be more confident．It will also encourage him to work hard in study（高分句型二）．Last but not least，soccer is about team effort．Joining soccer team is a chance to communicate more with people and make more friends，which will help him a lot in the future．（分析原因）
Wang Ming has grown up now，so he can get a chance to decide by himself．（得出结论）
I'm looking forward to your reply．Thanks so much．
Yours，
Zhang Wei

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