Question

1．请根据下面的中文提示写一篇英语短文．
（1）Tom是一个七年级的学生，他聪明，有礼貌．他的老师和同学们很喜欢他．
（2）他最喜欢的节日是春节．因为他可以吃很多美味食物，还可以得到很多的红包．
（3）但是，他知道，吃太多对健康不利．
（4）今年春节，他想少吃点，多锻炼．他想把他的零花钱捐给贫困地区的孩子们．
要求：（1）字数：70个左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数．
（2）内容必须包括所有要点，不得遗漏！
（3）参考词汇：零花钱：pocket money  春节：Chinese New Year
Tom is a Grade 7student．Tom is a Grade 7 student．He is clever and polite．His teachers and his classmates like him very much．His favourite festival is Chinese New Year．
Because he can eat a lot of delicious food，he can get many red packets，too．But he knows eating too much is bad for his health．This Chinese New Year，
he wants to eat less and exercise more．He wants to donate his pocket money to the children in poor areas．
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Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
But he knows①②eating too much is bad for his health但是他知道吃太多对健康不好．
①know后是省略了that的宾语从句．
②动名词短语做主语，谓语动词用单数．
【高分句型二】
He wants to donate his pocket money to the children in poor areas他想将零用钱捐给贫困地区的孩子．
介词短语in poor areas做后置定语，修饰children．

解答 Tom is a Grade 7 student．He is clever and polite．His teachers and his classmates like him very much．（Tom是一个七年级的学生，他聪明，有礼貌．他的老师和同学们很喜欢他．）His favourite festival is Chinese New Year．Because he can eat a lot of delicious food，he can get many red packets，too．（他最喜欢的节日是春节．因为他可以吃很多美味食物，还可以得到很多的红包．）But he knows eating too much is bad for his health【高分句型一】．（但是，他知道，吃太多对健康不利．）This Chinese New Year，he wants to eat less and exercise more．He wants to donate his pocket money to the children in poor areas．【高分句型二】（今年春节，他想少吃点，多锻炼．他想把他的零花钱捐给贫困地区的孩子们．）

点评 做英语书面表达时，只要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句．最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误