Question

【题目】书面表达。

请以“我的朋友” 为题，写一篇短文介绍你的好朋友Kate, 要点如下：

简介	1. Kate来自英国，现在和父母一起生活在泰州； 2. 戴着眼镜，又高又苗条; 3.在一所中学学习，老师、同学都对她很好。
爱好、特长	1.喜欢所有功课，最喜欢的科目是地理，因为她喜欢旅游 （travelling）； 2. 她擅长运动，认为运动对她有好处，是校足球队的一员; 3. 她也热爱看书，经常…….。
理想	她希望……(至少一点)。

注意：1.短文须包括所给的内容要点，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；

1. 词数80词左右。开头不计入总词数。

My friend

Kate is my best friend. She _____________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

My friend

Kate is my best friend. She is from England. Now she lives in Taizhou with their parents. She is tall and slim.She always wears a pair of glasses. She studies in a middle school. The teacher and the students are very friendly to her. She likes all the subjects, but her favorite subject is geography because she likes travelling. she is good at sports. She thinks that sports are good for her. She can play football well. She is a member of the school football team. She also loves to read. She often borrows books from her school library. She hopes she will be a professional football player in the future. I think she can make her dream come true.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的朋友。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：She is……；she never eats…；She shares…及she can…等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达好友的愿望。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的朋友的名字，接下来介绍朋友的特点和喜好，最后介绍了朋友的理想。文中用了一些固定短语如be friendly to， be good at，be good for等，还用了一些主从复合句如but her favorite subject is geography because she likes travelling. She hopes she will be a professional football player in the future.这些词组和复合句的运用都让文章增色不少。