题目内容
【题目】(题文)书面表达
下列图片描述的是上周日下午,刘强和赵磊所经历的一件事,请根据这些图片写一篇英语作文。
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要求: 1.字迹工整,语法正确,意思连贯,可适当发挥。
2.80—100词。
【答案】Liu Qiang and Zhao Lei are good friends. They both like playing soccer very much. Last Sunday, they decided to play soccer to relax in their neighborhood in the afternoon. They were both good at soccer and they played happily. Suddenly, Liu Qiang kicked the ball so hard that it flew to the window of Granny Ma's house and broke the window. The pieces of the window fell onto the ground everywhere. Liu Qiang and Zhao Lei felt very sorry. So they went to Granny Ma's house and said sorry to her.
Granny Ma said although they did something wrong, they were still good boys, because they were honest. They were happy to hear these words.
Everyone should try to be an honest person.
【解析】
本文属于看图作文,要表达刘强和赵磊经历的一件事,号召大家做一个诚实的学生。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
亮点说明:这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别适用一些亮点词句,如both用于be动词后,实意动词前,decide to,be good at, suddenly, so...that..., pieces of, although等。增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。