Question

初中阶段的学习生活即将结束。假设你是张华，身在中考考场，回想自己在父母和师长的关爱和帮助下的成长过程，心中充满感戴之情。请根据表中所列信息，用英语给父母或老师写一封80词左右的短信，深表谢意。(本题提供的是开放性提示，属开放性试题。)

感谢对象	Father	Mother	Miss Gao
参考用语	take care of, love, help, encourage, cheer up…
thankful, work hard, try to do better…

注意：

1.感谢对象可在父母或老师中任选其一，请避用真实姓名和校名。

2.除表格所列关键词语外，还可适当发挥、举例并抒发感受。

3.信的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数。

Dear__________,

Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you.

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                                Yours

                                                                                                        Zhang Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear Miss Gao,

Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you.

You’ve taken good care of my studies since I came to this school. When I’m in trouble, you always encourage me and give me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an English exam and was upset. You cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With your help, I’ve made great progress in English. I’m so thankful for your love that I’ll work harder and try to do better in the future.

Best wishes.

Yours

Zhang Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇利用图表的给材料作文。要求给成长过程中帮助你的人写一封感谢信。主要用到过去时态和一般现在时。

【亮点说明】作者巧妙地把所有的提示词融入到文章中，完整得叙述了对老师的感激之情以及感激老师的理由。本文衔接自然流畅，前后连贯，层层推进。本文最大的特点是作者使用了很多复合句， 状语从句，可见作者对初中阶段的句型掌握地还是很扎实的

考点：表格作文。