Question

【题目】书面表达

目前，越来越多的中学生在周末上各种各样的培训班或请家教。针对这一现象，人们普遍存在两者不同的观点，详见下表：

有必要	没必要
1.跟老师学比自己学好； 2.可以巩固课堂所学的内容； 3.可以学到更多东西。	1.容易养成依赖习惯； 2.学生需要时间休息； 3.许多培训班和家教一盈利为目的。

请以“Is Training Class or a Private Teacher Necessary”为题，写一篇70词以上的短文。

要求：1.反映上面表格中的内容；2.简要阐述自己的观点。

文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词：有效的effective 依赖的dependent

Is Training Class or a Private Teacher Necessary

These days， more and more middle school students are taking all kinds of training classes or having private teachers at weekends.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Is Training Class or a Private Teacher Necessary

These days， more and more middle school students are taking all kinds of training classes or having private teachers at weekends. There are two different opinions about it.

Some think it necessary. First， it’s more effective to study with a teacher than by themselves. Second， it can help them to learn the old lessons well. Third， they can learn a lot more.

Others think it unnecessary. They think students can easily become dependent on it， and the students need time to relax. Beside， many training classes and private teachers only think about making money.

In my opinion， if you are really bad at or interested in a certain subject maybe it’s OK for you. If not， it’s unnecessary.

【解析】

试题分析：本文题型是考生非常熟悉的正反观点类的议论文，在平时的练习中也有相应的模板。审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主，发表个人意见时使用第一人称。本文的要点均已给出，考生需要使用合适的连接词把孤立的要点联系成文。如for one thing， for another； besides， firstly， secondly， last but not least等。也要使用一些高级的词汇词组如 be supposed to do sth， benefit 等以提升文章的档次分。

写作亮点：本文包含了所有内容要点，结构清晰，先是一些同学认为有必要的观点，然后是认为没必要的观点，最后是自己的观点，观点明确，驾驭语言的能力强，选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇，运用了多种句型，使文章更富有变化。