Question

18．为了使同学们更加健康快乐地成长，学校决定向同学们征求建议．假如你是刘波，用英语向校长写一篇80个词左右的建议信．注意：文中应包含所有要点，并适当发挥；不能出现真实的校名和姓名．开头和结尾已给出，不计入
Dear Headmaster，
    I'm very glad to write a letter to you．These days we are talking about how to have a better school life．Here are some of my suggestions．First，I hope our school will
open the library more often．Second，I thinkour school can organize more after-class activities．Next I hope our school will give us more time for sports，art and music．And I suggest our school should organize fewer exams as well．As for our teachers，I hope theywill be our friends and make classes more interesting．And if they can talk less but more clearly in class，wewill be more interested in studying and have more time to practice．What's more，I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time．
Hope my suggestions will be helpful．Thanks for reading my letter!
                                                      Yours sincerely，
                                                               Liu Bo．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇利用图表给出写作提纲的作文．内容为假如你是刘波，为了使同学们更加健康快乐地成长，用英语向校长写一篇80个词左右的建议信．时态为一般现在时．人称为第一人称．写作要点包括：1．对学校的建议：多开放图书馆，组织更多的课后活动，为运动、美术、音乐留更多时间，减少考试次数等；2．对老师的建议：老师能成为自己的朋友，让课堂更有趣，课堂更清晰，少布置作业等．常用到的重点句型和短语：as for，as well，if引导的条件状语从句，what's more，on time等．

解答 Dear Headmaster，
 I'm very glad to write a letter to you．These days we are talking about how to have a better school life．
Here are some of my suggestions．First，I hope our school will open the library more often．Second，I think our school can organize more after-class activities．Next I hope our school will give us more time for sports，art and music．And I suggest our school should organize fewer exams as well．As for our teachers，I hope they will be our friends and make classes more interesting．And if they can talk less but more clearly in class，we will be more interested in studying and have more time to practice．What's more，I hope they will give us less homework and finish classes on time．
Hope my suggestions will be helpful．Thanks for reading my letter!

点评 这是一篇图表给出提纲的作文．提纲条理非常清晰，考生可从两方面展开作文，图表中列出的要点要全部包括在作文中．并可进行适当的拓展，所拓展内容要与作文内容相关，不可跑题．考生在组织作文时需注意表达要符合英语习惯，注意句子的主谓宾结构．