Question

书面表达（共1题；满分10分）

假设你是Mike，进入初中已经一个学期了，请你根据下表提供的信息给你的笔友Tom写一封邮件，告诉他有关你的初中生活。

注意：1．词数80左右，邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；

2．邮件必须包括所有内容要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺；

3．文章中不得出现真实的人名、地名、校名等相关信息。

Dear Tom.

Long time no see ! Are you OK? I study in my new school for half a year. Now, I'd like to tell you about my school life.

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Would you like to tell me about your school life?

Yours

Mike

Answer 1

There are more than 20 classes, more than 900 teachers and students in my school. The school is very modern. I walk to school from Monday to Friday and have 5 English classes every week. My favorite subject is math, because it is very interesting. I eat healthy food for lunch and I seldom eat snacks. I like listening to music in my spare time. I am good at playing basketball. Sometimes I play computer games on weekends. I feel very happy at school.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求我们据下表提供的信息给笔友Tom写一封邮件，告诉他有关你的初中生活。在题目中给了我们这篇短文的写作内容：一介绍学校概况；二是介绍学校生活；三是业余时间的活动；最后是对学校生活的感受。写作内容虽然已经列好，但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者根据提示要求介绍了自己学校等几个方面的情况，层次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如I feel very happy at school.等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如There are more than 20 classes, more than 900 teachers and students in my school.等。

考点：表格类作文。