Question

4．今年6月5日世界环境日的主题是倡导"低碳生活"，老师就"节能减排"问题组织了一场主题讨论：日常生活中，我们能为保护环境、减少污染做些什么？请用英语写一篇不少于 80词的短文，谈谈自己的想法．
参考词汇：discussion，protect the environment，be caused by，ordinary people，．instead of driving cars，use plastic bags，cut down on，recycle，natural food，save energy，reduce pollutions．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I think ①the environment is ②one of our biggest worries．我认为环境是我们最大的忧虑之一．
①think后引导宾语从句，省略了引导词that
②one of+最高级+名词复数"最…的之一"
高分句型二：
①It's best for people to take buses or walk ②instead of driving cars．对于人们来说最好是坐公共汽车或步行而不是开车．
①It's best for sb to do sth对某人来说做某事是最好的，it为形式主语，不定式为真正主语
②instead of 代替，而不是，后跟名词代词或动名词

解答 One possible version
Our class had a discussion about protecting the environment．【点题】Here is my opinion．I think the environment is one of our biggest worries．【高分句型一】It was found out that a lot of air pollution is actually caused by ordinary people，not just by big factories．There are so many things each one of us can do every day．It's best for people to take buses or walk instead of driving cars．【高分句型二】We should stop to use plastic bags for shopping．We can cut down on"waste，recycle trash and eat more natural food．In these ways we can save energy and reduce pollutions．【我们能为保护环境、减少污染做些什么】

点评 这是一篇提纲作文．是要求谈谈怎样保持快乐，时态比较单一，一般现在时，考生在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容．尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容，避免使用无把握或偏、难句型．注意所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯．