Question

【题目】书面表达。(10分)

根据图片提示，写一篇40词左右的英语短文，向同学们介绍一下你的朋友Nick的家庭情况。

Nick is my good friend.

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Nick is my good friend. He is an English boy. He is ten years old. He has a big family. These are his grandparents. His father is Paul Smith. His mother is Jenny Jones. Mike Smith is his uncle. Susan is his aunt. His uncle and his aunt are English teachers. Nick loves his family.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给看图作文，根据图画介绍Nick的家庭成员。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Nick is...; He is...; These are...; His father is ...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达Nick对家人的爱。

【写作亮点】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的朋友Nick和国籍和年龄，接下来介绍他的家人：祖父母、父母、叔叔和婶婶，最后表达Nick很爱他的家人。此处good friend, a big family, English teacher等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。