Question

4．在父亲节（6月16日）来临之际，请你根据下表提供的信息写一篇以"My father"为题的英语作文，从年龄外貌职业性格和爱好等介绍其大体情况，并谈谈你对父亲的评价．
要求：1）字数：80-100字．
2）文中不得出现真实的校名与人名．
3）可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯．
My father
My father
My father is forty-three years old．He is a teacher．He works very hard．He always wears a yellow coat and a pair of blue trousers．He like doing sports and he likes basketball best．
My father is very popular among the students because he always makes his classes interesting【高分句型一】．Besides，he is very patient with his students【高分句型二】．My father loves me very much．He checks my homework every day．He often buys delicious food for me．On weekends we often go to the park with my mother．
I love my father．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】My father is very popular among the students because he always makes his classes interesting．我的爸爸很受学生的欢迎，因为他总是让自己的课生动有趣．Make+sb．/sth．+形容词（宾语补足语）
【高分句型二】．Besides，he is very patient with his students．除此之外，他对学生很有耐心．
短语：be patient with sb．对…有耐心

解答 My father
My father is forty-three years old．He is a teacher．He works very hard．He always wears a yellow coat and a pair of blue trousers．He like doing sports and he likes basketball best．
  My father is very popular among the students because he always makes his classes interesting【高分句型一】．Besides，he is very patient with his students【高分句型二】．My father loves me very much．He checks my homework every day．He often buys delicious food for me．On weekends we often go to the park with my mother．
 I love my father．

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